Today, Angel completed a practice question for King Lear under timed conditions. I provided feedback on her introduction and first body paragraph, and I plan to send her more feedback when I have a good read-through of the essay. Things of note: - She has incorporated my feedback really well, and I can see improvements in her analysis - Her handwriting is illegible in some areas, which may be difficult for the markers to read - this should improve as she familiarises herself with the writing speed.